Some Strange Illusion *11-14-08 ROTD*
November 14th 2008 ~ Read of the day chosen by Sasha A scribbled check Upon the desk Made to me and Insanity, A dash of salt and a slight delusion I call muse -- Or some strange illusion I cradle ink...
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this brings me a little twisted smile seems we all have our moments of illusion over this or that really love the flow of this and apparently my check has been doubled maybe quadrupled, LOL!...XO
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stanza two is a wower....and the whole piece does have a nice flow
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"I cradle ink and spill the pink of yesterdays that have decayed into twilight clouds and shapeshifters rushing into stars and crowds" I love these lines and the visual that it brings. Susan~
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excellent, loved the read, the first four lines grabbed me and dragged me in
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Excellent post. I bet you enjoyed the writing as much as I enjoyed the reading! oddsocks
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I cradle ink and spill the pink of yesterdays that have decayed into twilight clouds and shapeshifters rushing into stars and crowds *clapping wildly*
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Thanks for all the comments -- I most certainly had a fun time writing it. I may have let my silliness take free rein in this just a little bit (or maybe more, lol). As for checks being quadrupled and...
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The whole poem flows beautifully. As quoted by a few the second stanza says so much. Loved the read this morning Hugs
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Well chosen words. Loved the images, and the cadence. Cheers.
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Life is the biggest illusion... it all depends on how you play it. Lovely write.
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What is reality?;Anymore than an illusion is a solution.....All conjure mask and mirrors ;a mind is easily fooled ...well done my sweet friend!
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Absolutely lovely Kristy, truly flows nicely... love it much.
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A dusting of pink for you all then -- and major thanks to pass around too You guys are soooo nice to me.
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An excellent write, dear poetess!! That light peppering of rhyme throughout is very enjoyably used!
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~ *clapping 'n' smiling* it is so wonderful to see you've posted another poem, sweetie I've always been a fan of your poetry, and this piece is no exception I wish I could get some strange illusion at...
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